ANZAC task

By Anonymous -
Our teacher set us a challenge to
step 1 find out what a haiku poem is and add an example of a haiku poem present the information
 step 2 brainstorm some interesting words about ANZAC
 step 3 make a haiku poem including the words you brainstorms
 step 4 present your poem
 So here is Kelly, Mackenzie and my presentation about ANZAC
 Please comment the good things about the presentation

Comments

  1. Anonymous5 May 2016 at 17:12

    It was so good to talk to you about your special time in Hawera. Apart from the fact that you caught up with some old friends, you also got to experience a dawn parade and all the emotion that is linked with that event. You 3 all collaborated together to create a very effective piece of work, The images that you chose to put with your writing have also added depth to the meaning of your words. I particularly liked 'bobbing up and down to the beat of the bagpipes' where you used alliteration effectively.

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