My exciting camp adventure (so far)

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My exciting camp adventure

Zzzzz “Wyatt turn the T.V off, I'm trying to sleep, wait a minute, I'm going on an adventure today hooray” I shouted

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  1. Anonymous31 March 2016 at 13:54

    remember to put speech marks before hooray.

    gabrielle

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  2. Anonymous31 March 2016 at 13:55

    remember to put speech marks before hooray.

    gabrielle

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