Dr Seuss challenge

Today we read a few sentences from a Dr Seuss story, I wish I had duck feet, and Mrs Cribb set up a challenge for room 9, the challenge was to write a poem like Dr Seuss and here is mine. Please comment if you like it and if you would suggest any changes.



 I wish it was the olden days
That would be some fun
I would'nt have to ride a car 
That would be quite bizarre 
And I would get lots done