Worst day ever (GullFrazie's point of view)
This is the story I'm working on at the moment it's about the seagull that fell into chicken tikka masala , to see more come back soon and I'll be posting my full story. (Comment what you like about my story so far and what I could add to this paragraph) Hi. I'm Gull Frazie, welcome to seagull news.” “Today I'm going to be talking about……...” “Mmmmmmm, I smell deliciousness. I wonder what that spicy, creamy, delicious smell is?” PLONK!!!!!! “ahhhhhhh,” my tummy was twisting, I was aching, I lost grip and ended up in a weird tub.
Good girl, however your script is lacking some punctuation and capital letters I think.
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