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I'm working on: revising and editing my writing independently giving and responding to feedback Please leave a comment of something to help me edit or revise this piece of writing 29/12/2015 It’s my birthday today, it’s my birthday today. Oh sorry, as you probably noticed it’s my 15th BIRTHDAY!!   Gift list Ombre hair Nothing Nothing Iphone Suprise   Yes. A surprise. I’m thinking it’s a theme park or a trip to Hawaii!!! So we are in the car now and we are going to my surprise EKKK! We stopped off at a mansion. But who’s that, She she looks just like me, the same hair except blonde and straight, we have the same nails but a different colour and OMG!!!!!! She has the other side of my necklace!!! I opened my locket for the first time and there we were…..       1/1/2016 It’s new year's day and nothing is going on (except fireworks tonight) All that fuss about twins is now paying off. WE ARE RICH!!...

OUR DREAM HOUSE

Wyatt (My brother check out his blog on the Frankley school website under Te Pihinga), Maggie (My awesome little cousin) and Me (I'm just me) made this slideshow on our dream house. ENJOY WATCHING AWSOMENESS!!!!

Global issues

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For week 4 of the blogging challenge its all about Global issues. We have chosen to create a picture to encourage other people to be a SUPERHERO and help people who don't normally have anything to eat and drink. Comment if you think this is a good idea!

illegal images

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If you want to use an image for a commercial or something on your blog you have to do it the safe way. Step 1 Go on images and search up what you want to use Step 2 On the top right below the search bar there is settings click on that, It will come up with a few options so click on advanced search  Step 3 Scroll right to the bottom and on the left you should see usage rights. at the moment it should be on not filtered by licence well you will have to change that, if you want it on a commercial change it to free to use or share even commercially if you just want to put it on you blog just click free to use or share. Thanks for reading this and make sure to use this so you don't get fined or arrested.  Thumbs Up Free Stock Photo - Public Domain Pictures Public Domain Pictures 1920 × 1670 Search by image Thumbs Up Visit page View image Save View saved Share Images may be subject to copyright. Send fee...

What makes a good comment

My writing goals: Focus on a moment in time rather than jumping from one idea to another and structure my writing so its grammatically correct What makes a good comment Step 1 Compliment the writer. If you liked the writing tell them and tell them why. If you liked the images they choose, tell them. Step 2 Add your prior knowledge Say if they were writing about pandas and they didn't add anything about what they eat and you know something about what they eat add that to your comment. Step 3 End with a question To get a conversation going add a question so they can answer and you can have a bigger conversation.

What do I see?

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  I see something what could It be? It is red what could it be? It's round what could it be? It has a worm poking out of it what could it be? It needs washing what could it be? Hmmm, what is it? Comment what you think this eye sees.

All about me

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All about me My avatar.  I'm Gypsy and I'm ten years old. My favourite book series is Scarlet and Ivy by Sophie Cleverly. I've got a dog called Dixie she's a white German shepherd My favourite YouTube channel is Rosanna Pansino because I want to be a chef when I grow up and I love to cook and discover new recipes. I do dancing and swimming. My signature hairstyle is a side ponytail and pigtails.