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This Writing is about a dance school but there is a twist....... Each chapter is a different language. Please comment if you are from a different country and if you can understand any of my writing. Chapter 1: Jamie (French)    Bonjour, je suis Jamie. École de danse du coucher du soleil j’arrive!!! "Me souhaite de la chance, mademoiselle Kate", ai-je crié. "Groupe 1 sur le sol, en position," J'ai dansé aussi fort que possible. J'ai besoin de cet espace dans Une Troupe. Cela signifie le monde pour moi. "Groupe suivant", j'ai entendu que madame Kate répondait. Je suis prêt à être un danseur professionnel dans SDS Une troupe. Chapter 2: Riley (Dutch) Hallo, ik ben Riley. Ik auditie vandaag voor SDS A troupe. Ik betwijfel of ik zal binnenkomen. Ik ben niet de beste danser en ze zijn zo veel dansers die beter zijn dan ik, maar oh goed. "Wens me gelukkige meiden," zei ik tegen mijn beste vrienden Emma en...

I'm working on: revising and editing my writing independently giving and responding to feedback Please leave a comment of something to help me edit or revise this piece of writing 29/12/2015 It’s my birthday today, it’s my birthday today. Oh sorry, as you probably noticed it’s my 15th BIRTHDAY!!   Gift list Ombre hair Nothing Nothing Iphone Suprise   Yes. A surprise. I’m thinking it’s a theme park or a trip to Hawaii!!! So we are in the car now and we are going to my surprise EKKK! We stopped off at a mansion. But who’s that, She she looks just like me, the same hair except blonde and straight, we have the same nails but a different colour and OMG!!!!!! She has the other side of my necklace!!! I opened my locket for the first time and there we were…..       1/1/2016 It’s new year's day and nothing is going on (except fireworks tonight) All that fuss about twins is now paying off. WE ARE RICH!!...